Voki

Today our task was to use voki and how to use and learn it.
Have you ever used voki before?
I would love feedback on my character and her body and hair.

Amazing America

In the last week we decided to do information reports on a country.I did america this is my one down below

America

By Adelaide

America is an amazing place to visit. America has

Incredible places, outstanding festivals and boiling sun.

Festivals in America

America has a lot of festivals. Here are some of them that you may
like:Independence day, Kwanzaa,Thanksgiving,Mash festival
Halloween and also Sasquatch. Independence Day  is celebrated
on the 4th of July. Independence day is a federal holiday in the
United States commemorating the adoption of declaration of
Independence from Britain.

Food eaten in America

Lots of American people have different food to New Zealanders.
You may like some of these particular ones suggested here:tater tots,
sourdough bread,cobb salad,pot roast,twinkies,jerky and key lime pie.
key lime pie is an American dessert made of Key lime juice, egg yolks,
and sweetened condensed milk in a pie crust. Jerky is lean meat that has
been trimmed off the fat, cut into strips, and then dried to stop it from
going off.

Places you can go in America

Lots of places in America are amazing and very very fascinating.
You can visit some of these top places you may like:magnificent
Honolulu,popular Grand Canyon,fantastic Maui,charming Hawaii,
fascinating Big sur, and  elegant Boston. These places have beautiful
beaches and incredible trees.These place are very sunny.

The Grand Canyon

The Grand Canyon is an amazing sight and view to see. The Grand
Canyon is one of the largest gorges in the world.The Grand Canyon
is in the northern horizon northwest of the city

of Flagstaff. The Grand Canyon is an Incredible view.
The Grand Canyon Is 1,857 metres deep.The Colorado river
flows through the Grand Canyon.

Now that you know what America is like you can now go see for yourself.
You might even want to try the food suggested.

My Voki Character

this is my voki character

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