My kitten chilly
My kitten likes to play around
She makes a lot of sound
She meows a lot
And she will always get in a knot
She sleeps with me
And will follow me when i go for a pee
She is very very greedy
Her eyes are very beady
I love her so much
My puppy
My puppy is so cute
Would look cool in a suit
Loves to play
And I got her in May
I love her
She also has very soft fur
I haven't had her for long
She thinks she is strong
She pounces a lot
She gets caught in a knot
My friend
My friend is very kind
she has a friendly mind
she always has a caring heart
And she is very smart
She loves to laugh
always have a photograph
We always bring our scooters to school
And she never breaks the rule
She is the best
I call her Miriana
Hey Adelaide,
ReplyDeleteWhat cool poetry you have created! I really enjoyed reading them all. I think my favourite was the puppy one... maybe because I have a wee puppy of my own! I often dress my puppy up! We just got him a new fancy bow tie so the suit bit reminded me of that!
A way to improve this post could be to put the different poems on a slide - that way it would be easy to scroll through and not so long on the computer screen. What gave you the idea to create these poems on these subjects?
Thanks.I will try put it on a slide next time if i have a long docs.On fridays my teacher mrs tanner does poetry with us and tells us all the kind of differant poetry.We started off with easy and did rhyming poems.I decided to write some of my own at home and did all of this.And i have always wanted a puppy.Thanks fo the advice
ReplyDeleteI am glad that you will put on a slide next time! Friday's sound pretty cool! What is your favourite type of poetry? What kind of puppy would you like? Maybe you could put that in the poem! e.g. Golden retrievers are my favourite type, they always live up to all the hype. Except for when they dig big holes, even when you have told them "NO!"
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